Ms. Cohen's class came to room 421 in the morning. Ms. McKeone told us we need to make a comic. I helped make a comic with a young student named Amir. I asked him to drag pictures and type in the dialogue. Amir and I were done after we made our comic about what Amir likes about this school and class.
Being a mentor and helping a student is everything to me. I let Amir do his own comic by dragging pictures and typing dialogue words in the application. Amir and I exported the comic as a PDF File to the web. I told him what he must do on my computer. We emailed out our comic as an attachment to Ms. McKeone.
After we made our comic, we talked at our fifth period lunch and I asked Amir where was he from. Then Ms. Cohen's class was getting ready to say goodbye to Ms. McKeone's class. Mr. Southerton took a picture of us in the hallway and no security guards were bothering us. It was nice having Ms. Cohen's class over to our school, it almost looked like a meeting to me. We collaborated together on our assignment and we got collaboration dollars.
you add a lot of details and your main idea wasn't clear. but you did make sense
